Today we talked about slowing down and looking at things carefully. Please remember, look carefully between leaving school today and arriving tomorrow morning, and choose one thing or item that made you think more deeply. Remember the Silver Shoes! You will write a short poem about what you choose! Here is my example!! Please write a comment on what I am really trying to say!!
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Joris
11/17/2015 05:18:51 am
Nice poem, I like how you repeated the questions and how it is different from other poems.
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bi
11/17/2015 05:49:25 am
Ms Anne, that is a really good. I love the bit at the end 'Why not?'. I also like the two shoes that you cut out, they are really pretty.
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Sanaa Banaa
11/18/2015 08:35:02 am
Wow Ms. Anne I love your poem it's very nice and I love the big, sliver high heeled shoes can't wait to do mine well thats if were doing one?!
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redi
11/19/2015 07:09:32 am
can it be a poem to discribe the thing and can it ryme because mine does and can it be simple?
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yewon
11/19/2015 08:08:53 am
i like your poem, ms.anne! i want to write poem tomorrow. it was very fun to search the books!
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Sahana
11/26/2015 05:50:58 am
I really enjoyed reading ur poem!!
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