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Knock,Knock,Knock! Ding,Dong,Ding,Dong. The doorbell rang and the door swung open!
A man walked in slowly toward Lily and Anna. Lily and Anna are twins. They both have peach blond hair and it is long and flowy. They live in a small house on 5th Avenue, New York.
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“Hello,” a voice whispered in a deep scary tone.
“He He Hello, ”mumbled Anna.
“Who are you and why are you here?” Lily shouted.
“This is for you,”whispered the man. His voice seemed to echo through the whole house. Anna and Lily were terrified by the man, They did not know what to do. The man in the black uniform and hoodie left the house and the door slammed behind him.
“What was that?” said Anna,
“I don’t know!!”
The girls did not know what to do.
First there was a strange man in their house, then the man left a weird bag right in the middle of their living room! The girls really wanted to open the bag but they were really scared and they were also really suspicious because they did not see the strange man’s face because it was covered by a hoody.
The girls sat down in front of the bag and started to fall asleep.
Anna woke up and realized something, something weird.
“THE BAG IS GONE!”yelled Anna.
Lily jumped up and started running around the house. Lily did not realize the bag was gone. She thought Anna wanted to play a game or something.
“ What! the bag is gone? You mean that bag that that weird man dropped off here last night?”
“Yes that bag!”
The girls looked all over the house and they could not find the bag. They looked everywhere but one place……..The attic!
“I am not going up there!”
“Well neither am I!!”said Anna.
“Ok, Then I guess we will never know what’s in that bag!” said Lily.
Anna stomped up the stairs and stopped to realize that it was her’s and Lily’s birthday that very day!. She ran downstairs to tell Lily about it. Lily was so surprised. They were so overwhelmed by that man who came into their house that they did not realize that it was their birthday.
They decided to take the chance and go up in the attic to see if the bag was there. When they got to the top of the stairs they said they would go up together.
“Will you go with me?” Anna said in a terrified voice.
“ Oh oh ok,” Lily mumbled.
They pulled the ladder down and walked up the ladder.
They got to the top of the ladder and opened the door…….
“SURPRISE!!!!”
The whole room shouted out loud and the two girls were so surprised.
They don’t even know how they had set the party up!
“How did you guys get this party set up?”
“We used the bag!”
“I was the man that walked into your house last night!!”
“You mean you Josh, you were the man?”
“ Yes!! We wanted to have a surprize party for you two. Oh, and yes I was that man!!”
“You guys are the best friends and was that whole party really in the bag??!”
“Yes and I was the one who put all the stuff in the bag and that is why we can have our memories and we can call it the…..THE PARTY BAG!” smiled Josh.